Episode 1
The Aftermath
The City was in flames no cars in sight those that were in sight were flipped on their sides.The screams of those who were still alive were all that was heard as the dead walked down the streets,all buildings (boarded up),all windows (shattered),all humans in the open ripped to shreds no one had all parts of their body and those that did were the recently dead."The Lucky Ones there were"these were the words Frank Johnson heard as the moans grew quieter
"How can we be sure they aren't back yet they could have found someone else out their what happens if they hear us"A worried mother asked the man who was once a family now a hardened war monger(his name was Riccio James,former mobster ,Failed 8th grade 2 times,6ft2inches 180 pounds)
Frank Could easily tell that Riccio was hiding something his hands were shaking as he opened his cantine
"The Blood of God"Riccio told the little girl who was hiding with her mother.
The mother quickly took the girl to another corner.
All Frank could hear was mumbling from the mother explaining what he man meant by Blood of God
The Girl was Puzzled she understood that he was religious but she didn't understand why he drank before he said that.
Frank finally talked to the ones he didn't recognize
"How did you get here"frank quietly and calmly asked the mother and daughter
"Get away ya brown suit"The woman screamed
The moans became closer again they dead were positive of the frightened humans location they were finally destroying the wood that barricaded them to safety Frank quickly pulled out his revolver and loaded it while Riccio pulled out his hunting knife.
The wood was gone the people were just faded memories of a person who had lost all humanity
Their therapy was working fine everyone was proud of their progress,although all they saw was a buffet they had to admit it seemed familiar everything was just faded but still their.
END OF CHAPTER 1















Comments
With sentences etc like so:
"no one had all parts of their body"
Perhaps try something more like:
"no person retained all of there limbs"
Both basically get the same point across, but after you have the basic draft like above, try experimenting a little with the wording to try and spice and interest things up a bit.
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